Write an essay about what you love to do in your spare time.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young I used to go to a department stores with friends.
But these days I prefer staying at home.
And one of my hobby is watching dramas.
Thus, I mostly spend my spare time by watching dramas.
I watch both Chinese and Korean dramas.
Currently, the drama\'s name I am watching is “One thousand and one nights”。
It is a Chinese drama.
강사 첨삭
Good sentences right here! Keep it up ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> When I was young I used to go to department stores with my friends.
But these days I prefer staying at home.
But these days I prefer staying at home.
>> correct
And one of my hobby is watching dramas.
And one of my hobby is watching dramas.
>> correct
Thus, I mostly spend my spare time by watching dramas.
Thus, I mostly spend my spare time by watching dramas.
>> correct
I watch both Chinese and Korean dramas.
I watch both Chinese and Korean dramas.
>> correct
Currently, the drama\'s name I am watching is “One thousand and one nights”。
Currently, the drama\'s name I am watching is “One thousand and one nights”。
>> correct
It is a Chinese drama.
It is a Chinese drama.
>> correct
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