Write an essay about working with other people.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think working with others has more advantage than disadvantage.
First, you can have lunch with someone,
Second, if there is any problem occurs during the working you can share ideas to each other.
So I enjoy working with others.
강사 첨삭
Great essay! Short and simple but precise :) Keep it up ^^
- Teacher Debbie
I think working with others has more advantage than disadvantage.
>> correct
First, you can have lunch with someone,
First, you can have lunch with someone,
>> correct
Second, if there is any problem occurs during the working you can share ideas to each other.
Second, if there is any problem occurs during the working you can share ideas to each other.
>> Second, if any problem occurs at work, you can get help from someone.
So I enjoy working with others.
So I enjoy working with others.
>> correct
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