Write an essay about your favorite food.
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My favorite food is fried pork with sweet and sour source.
It is delicious Chinese dish cooked with pork.
Depending on you taste you can put pie apple, onions, ginger, garlic etc. while you are cooking.
I like this dish so if I can I want to eat it every day.
But you need to deep fry it into oil.
Thus it needs much oil every time.
So, it is hard to cook at home.
I usually eat it twice a month.
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Thank you for this essay! ^^
- Teacher Debbie
My favorite food is fried pork with sweet and sour source.
>> My favorite food is fried pork with sweet and sour sauce.
It is delicious Chinese dish cooked with pork.
It is delicious Chinese dish cooked with pork.
>> It is a delicious Chinese dish cooked with pork.
Depending on you taste you can put pie apple, onions, ginger, garlic etc. while you are cooking.
Depending on you taste you can put pie apple, onions, ginger, garlic etc. while you are cooking.
>> Depending on your taste, you can put pineapple, onions, ginger, garlic, etc. on it.
I like this dish so if I can I want to eat it every day.
I like this dish so if I can I want to eat it every day.
>> correct
But you need to deep fry it into oil.
But you need to deep fry it into oil.
>> correct
Thus it needs much oil every time.
Thus it needs much oil every time.
>> correct
So, it is hard to cook at home.
So, it is hard to cook at home.
>> correct
I usually eat it twice a month.
I usually eat it twice a month.
>> correct
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