Write an essay about your favorite genre of music.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in my twenties I used to listen Korean pop song.
But these days I only listen to music only while I am driving.
While I drive I usually listen to radio and listen the music that the radio plays.
On the weekends I like to go to cafes to read books.
Most of the cafe play jazz, and I like the music that the shop plays.
강사 첨삭
Great essay ^^ Keep it up!
- Teacher Debbie
>> songs
But these days I only listen to music only while I am driving.
But these days I only listen to music only while I am driving.
>> correct
While I drive I usually listen to radio and listen the music that the radio plays.
While I drive I usually listen to radio and listen the music that the radio plays.
>> While I drive I usually listen to radio and listen to the music that the radio plays.
On the weekends I like to go to cafes to read books.
On the weekends I like to go to cafes to read books.
>> correct
Most of the cafe play jazz, and I like the music that the shop plays.
Most of the cafe play jazz, and I like the music that the shop plays.
>> Most of the cafes play jazz and I like what they play.
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