Write an essay about your favorite movie.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite movie are Marvel movies.
It has many hero and each hero has it\'s own movies series.
Marvel also has a series named Avenger\'s
In Avenger\'s all Marvel hero all come together to protect the earth.
Avenger\'s - The end Game is the last series of Avenger\'s.
It is sad that all Avenger\'s movies was ended.
I hope Marvel\'s filmmaker can make more good movies in the future.
강사 첨삭
Regarding this essay, it is well-written but you should watch your singular and plural forms ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> correct
It has many hero and each hero has it\'s own movies series.
It has many hero and each hero has it\'s own movies series.
>> It has many heroes and each of them has their own movie series.
Marvel also has a series named Avenger\'s
Marvel also has a series named Avenger\'s
>> Marvel also has a movie series named The Avengers.
In Avenger\'s all Marvel hero all come together to protect the earth.
In Avenger\'s all Marvel hero all come together to protect the earth.
>> In The Avengers, all Marvel heroes come together to protect the earth.
Avenger\'s - The end Game is the last series of Avenger\'s.
Avenger\'s - The end Game is the last series of Avenger\'s.
>> The Avengers: Endgame is the last movie in the series.
It is sad that all Avenger\'s movies was ended.
It is sad that all Avenger\'s movies was ended.
>> It is sad that all Avengers movie has ended.
I hope Marvel\'s filmmaker can make more good movies in the future.
I hope Marvel\'s filmmaker can make more good movies in the future.
>> I hope Marvel\'s filmmakers would make more good movies in the future.
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