Write an essay about your favorite restaurant.
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I have no favorite restaurant in Korea.
But I have two in China.
First is a dim sum restaurant named DingTaiPeng.
DingTaiPeng has many chains in Korea.
I have been to several chain restaurants in Korea.
But all the menus in their taste different from the original restaurant in China and much expensive than the original restaurant.
Second is a Grilled Chicken Wing Skewers restaurant name 1976.
it also has a chain in Korea.
The taste is similar to China but it has less menus than China.
And it is a little far from my home and they have no menu for kids.
So it is hard to go often.
강사 첨삭
Impressive! Keep up the good work, [이름] ^^
- Teacher Debbie
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But I have two in China.
But I have two in China.
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First is a dim sum restaurant named DingTaiPeng.
First is a dim sum restaurant named DingTaiPeng.
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DingTaiPeng has many chains in Korea.
DingTaiPeng has many chains in Korea.
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I have been to several chain restaurants in Korea.
I have been to several chain restaurants in Korea.
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But all the menus in their taste different from the original restaurant in China and much expensive than the original restaurant.
But all the menus in their taste different from the original restaurant in China and much expensive than the original restaurant.
>> But all the menus tastes different from the original restaurant in China and is much expensive than the original restaurant.
Second is a Grilled Chicken Wing Skewers restaurant name 1976.
Second is a Grilled Chicken Wing Skewers restaurant name 1976.
>> Second is a Grilled Chicken Wing Skewers restaurant named 1976.
it also has a chain in Korea.
it also has a chain in Korea.
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The taste is similar to China but it has less menus than China.
The taste is similar to China but it has less menus than China.
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And it is a little far from my home and they have no menu for kids.
And it is a little far from my home and they have no menu for kids.
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So it is hard to go often.
So it is hard to go often.
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