Write an essay about your funniest experience.
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Hi there JM!
How are you? I hope everything is good there.
Thanks for writing this essay. See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
When learning swim[이름]g, I was praticing swim[이름]g in the pool before the class.
>>> When I was still learning how to sing, I practiced in the pool before the class.
At that time some of people were leering at me so I just think that why they were looking at me in my [이름]d.
>>> At that time, I noticed that some people were leering at me.
I ignored others attentions. but, It was my mistake.
>>> I ignored them but it was actually a mistake.
My girlfriends said that plz check your appearence.
>>> My girlfriend said to check my appearance.
So i visited restroom to check my appearance.
>>> So I visited the restroom.
but i didn`t recognized my faulty.
>>> However, I didn\'t recognize the problem.
After few [이름]utes, I re-entered into a pool.
>>> Correct!
But teacher told me that you were wearing swim[이름]g suit inside out.
>>> At that time, my teacher told me that I was wearing my swim suit inside out.
i was very shamed my behaivors.
>>> I was very ashamed.
and my girlfreind wonder that why you didn`t change your swim[이름]g suit?
>>> My girlfriend wondered why I didn\'t change my swimsuit.
, so, I answered that in the restroom, it is possible to check upper body by the mirror.
>>> I explained to her that in the restroom, you can only see your upper reflection in the mirror.
so, All of partipants were understanding my false.
>>> After my explanation, all participants understood me.
It is latest funny accident for me.
>>> It is the funniest experience for me.
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