Write an essay about your funniest experience.

2017-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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When learning swim[이름]g, I was praticing swim[이름]g in the pool before the class. At that time some of people were leering at me so I just think that why they were looking at me in my [이름]d. I ignored others attentions. but, It was my mistake. My girlfriends said that plz check your appearence. So i visited restroom to check my appearance. but i didn`t recognized my faulty. After few [이름]utes, I re-entered into a pool. But teacher told me that you were wearing swim[이름]g suit inside out. i was very shamed my behaivors. and my girlfreind wonder that why you didn`t change your swim[이름]g suit? , so, I answered that in the restroom, it is possible to check upper body by the mirror. so, All of partipants were understanding my false. It is latest funny accident for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there JM!

How are you? I hope everything is good there.

Thanks for writing this essay. See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


When learning swim[이름]g, I was praticing swim[이름]g in the pool before the class.

>>>  When I was still learning how to sing, I practiced in the pool before the class.

At that time some of people were leering at me so I just think that why they were looking at me in my [이름]d.

>>> At that time, I noticed that some people were leering at me.

I ignored others attentions. but, It was my mistake.

>>> I ignored them but it was actually a mistake.

My girlfriends said that plz check your appearence.

>>> My girlfriend said to check my appearance.

So i visited restroom to check my appearance.

>>> So I visited the restroom.

but i didn`t recognized my faulty.

>>> However, I didn\'t recognize the problem.

After few [이름]utes, I re-entered into a pool.

>>> Correct!

But teacher told me that you were wearing swim[이름]g suit inside out.

>>> At that time, my teacher told me that I was wearing my swim suit inside out.

i was very shamed my behaivors.

>>> I was very ashamed.

and my girlfreind wonder that why you didn`t change your swim[이름]g suit?

>>> My girlfriend wondered why I didn\'t change my swimsuit.

, so, I answered that in the restroom, it is possible to check upper body by the mirror.

>>> I explained to her that in the restroom, you can only see your upper reflection in the mirror.

so, All of partipants were understanding my false.

>>> After my explanation, all participants understood me.

It is latest funny accident for me.

>>> It is the funniest experience for me.

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