Write an essay about your long weekend

2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Write an essay about your long weekend I went seafood market whith my cousin's family and we bought some seafood. we cooked it and ate all

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HI there [이름] Ho!   Happy Thursday! It\'s good to know that you spend time with your relatives and probably you enjoyed it.:) I like seafoods so much especially shrimps. How about you? Well, tell me your answer in class.   ~Teacher Shanee   Write an essay about your long weekendI went seafood market whith my cousin\'s family and we bought some seafood. we cooked it and ate all >>I went to the seafood market with my cousin\'s family (relatives) and we bought sone seafoods. We cooked and ate them all. OR: >>I went to the seafood market with my relatives and we bought some seafoods. After that, we cooked them and finished them all.

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