Write an essay about your typical weekend.
학생이 쓴 원문
During the weekends I usually go to Kids Cafes.
It is safer to go to a Kids Cafe than go outside.
Because Kids Cafes usually decorated by foam block.
And if it is a bigger one, than there will be many stuffs to keep children\'s safe.
Also there are many activities kids can do.
Like slides, trampoline, riding, sand play and so on.
Which are hard to do at home.
There are also rest spaces provide for parents to take a rest or have some drinks.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Debbie
>> During the weekend, I usually go to the Kids Cafes.
It is safer to go to a Kids Cafe than go outside.
It is safer to go to a Kids Cafe than go outside.
>> It is safer to go to a Kids Cafe than to go outside.
Because Kids Cafes usually decorated by foam block.
Because Kids Cafes usually decorated by foam block.
>> Because Kids Cafes are usually decorated with foam blocks.
And if it is a bigger one, than there will be many stuffs to keep children\'s safe.
And if it is a bigger one, than there will be many stuffs to keep children\'s safe.
>> And if it is a bigger one, then there will be more stuff to keep the children safe.
Also there are many activities kids can do.
Also there are many activities kids can do.
>> correct
Like slides, trampoline, riding, sand play and so on.
Like slides, trampoline, riding, sand play and so on.
>> correct
Which are hard to do at home.
Which are hard to do at home.
>> correct
There are also rest spaces provide for parents to take a rest or have some drinks.
There are also rest spaces provide for parents to take a rest or have some drinks.
>> There are also rest spaces provided for parents to take a rest or have some drinks.
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