Write in 5-8 sentences. describe your favorite fictional character in as much detail as possible
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I like to describe my father. it is not fictioal character but real character.
My father is very conservative person. I had to get up early in the every morning and did cleaning at house ground everyday.
when he called me, if I answered to him lately, He shout me in anger.
He did not forgive, when I mistake something. he always said the world is a competitive society. only the strong can survive.
강사 첨삭
1. I like to describe my father.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I want to tell you about my father.
2. it is not fictioal character but real character.
>>It is not a fictional character but a real character.
3. My father is very conservative person.
>>My father is a very conservative person.
4. I had to get up early in the every morning and did cleaning at house ground everyday.
>>I had to get up early every morning and did cleaning at our yard everyday.
5.when he called me, if I answered to him lately, He shout me in anger.
>>When he would call me and when I answered late, he would shout at me in anger.
6.He did not forgive, when I mistake something.
>>He did not forgive me, when I did something wrong.
7. he always said the world is a competitive society.
>>He used to always say that the world is a competitive society.
8. only the strong can survive.
>>Only the strong can survive.
Very nice sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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