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I was born in Seoul, South Korea, in 1988, and lived there until I came to Japan. I thought somedays I would go to united states and enjoy my life there. When I was 22, I won the hard competition with ratio of 1:7 and worked as a translator between Korean army force and U.S. Army force as a KATUSA.
Terminating the military service, I studied as hard as I could with my wife. With all the efforts, She and I were able to enter the same medical school and graduate. My wife loves Japan a lot. One day, she heard that a foreign doctor could be qualified to take JMLE. We studied together and passed the exam. Now we have both Korean and Japanese medical licenses.
My wife and I came to Hokkaido, Japan three years ago. Since I had to serve the military, my wife became a doctor one year earlier than me even though we were born in the same year. I started to work one year later than her, but we are working in the same hospital as anesthesiologists. I am satisfied with life here
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Wow this is amazing! Thank you for sharing something about your life. ^_^
I was born in Seoul, South Korea, in 1988, and lived there until I came to Japan.
>> Correct.
I thought somedays I would go to united states and enjoy my life there.
>> I thought someday, I would go to the United States and enjoy my life there.
When I was 22, I won the hard competition with ratio of 1:7 and worked as a translator between Korean army force and U.S. Army force as a KATUSA.
>> When I was 22, I won a hard competition with a ratio of 1:7 and, worked as a translator between the Korean army and the U.S. Army force as a KATUSA.
>> With the end of my military service, I studied as hard as I could with my wife.
>> With all the efforts we did, she and I were able to enter the same medical school and was able to graduate there.
My wife loves Japan a lot.
>> Correct.
One day, she heard that a foreign doctor could be qualified to take JMLE.
>> Correct.
We studied together and passed the exam.
>> Correct.
Now we have both Korean and Japanese medical licenses.
>> Correct.
My wife and I came to Hokkaido, Japan three years ago.
>> Correct.
Since I had to serve the military, my wife became a doctor one year earlier than me even though we were born in the same year.
>> Correct.
I started to work one year later than her, but we are working in the same hospital as anesthesiologists.
>> Correct.
I am satisfied with life here
>> I am satisfied with my life here.
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