Write some sentences about Kim Yu Na, a famous international figure skater .
학생이 쓴 원문
She was the best skater in the world. I know that she retired.
She is elegant rather than pretty. When she showed figure skating, her body line was really beautiful. After her retirement, I can see her on TV advertosement.
Actually I don\'t have any interests about her so I don\'t have much to say.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for telling me about Kim Yu Na, Ms. [Name], indeed, she is a pride to your country and she is a very good example to kids and adults alike. Have a great day ahead, take care, and see you. =)
~~ T. Ali =)
She was the best skater in the world. I know that she retired.
>> Correct
She is elegant rather than pretty.
>> Correct
When she showed figure skating, her body line was really beautiful.
>> Correct
After her retirement, I can see her on TV advertosement.
>> After her retirement, I can see her on TV advertisements.
Actually I don\'t have any interests about her so I don\'t have much to say.
>> Correct
~~ T. Ali =)
She was the best skater in the world. I know that she retired.
>> Correct
She is elegant rather than pretty.
>> Correct
When she showed figure skating, her body line was really beautiful.
>> Correct
After her retirement, I can see her on TV advertosement.
>> After her retirement, I can see her on TV advertisements.
Actually I don\'t have any interests about her so I don\'t have much to say.
>> Correct
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