Write some sentences about your Online Seminar on Sunday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Since last March, any meeting and seminar have been restricted by the law. So many online seminars have been holding.
It\'s benefit is convenience because we can see a seminar at home. But because this cause, I couldn\'t pay attention and did something.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this information, Ms. [Name], indeed there are some advantages and disadvantages of online seminars. Take care, and see you. =)
~~ T. Ali =)
Since last March, any meeting and seminar have been restricted by the law. >> Correct
So many online seminars have been holding.
>> So many online seminars have been held.
It\'s benefit is convenience because we can see a seminar at home.
It\'s benefit is convenience because we can see a seminar at home.
>> One of its benefits is that we can have a seminar at home.
But because this cause, I couldn\'t pay attention and did something.
>> But because of this, I couldn\'t pay attention and do something else at times.
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