Write some sentences about your Spring Season this year.
학생이 쓴 원문
This spring is a blue spring to me. In every spring, I traveled abroad. But because of COVID-19, I couldn\'t travel anywhere. Instead of trip, I wll drive with my dog along the cherryblossum road this coming Saturday.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this, Ms. [Name], again we hope Spring will be the usual Spring we know next year. Well, take care and enjoy anyhow. Cheers~! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
This spring is a blue spring to me. >> Correct
In every spring, I traveled abroad.
>> Every Spring, I travel abroad.
But because of COVID-19, I couldn\'t travel anywhere.
>> Correct
Instead of trip, I wll drive with my dog along the cherryblossum road this coming Saturday.
>> Instead of having a trip, I will drive with my dog along the Cherry blossoms road this coming Saturday.
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