Write something about the things you think a Korean should be proud of.

2013-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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i think it hasnot reanson. i was bone korea and i leaved in korea in the fact that is the almost reanson. the korean war left korea dewastated. but we succeeded to reconstruct country. also korea make great advances. i love on the national traits of the korean.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my [이름]!^^ How are you? Thank you again for taking time to answer this homework. I have my corrections for you below. Read them for me and understand the meaning. Take care now. I\'ll talk to you very soon. ~t. Hannah~ i think it hasnot reanson. >>I think there is no reason not to be proud of being a Korean.i was bone korea and i leaved in korea >>I was born here in Korea nd lived all my life here just the same.in the fact that is the almost reanson. >>In fact that\'s the reason why I\'m proud of being one.the korean war left korea dewastated. >>The Korean war left Korea devastated.but we succeeded to reconstruct country. >>But we were able to reconstrust almost everything.also korea make great advances. >>Also, Korea made a lot of changes and improvements.i love on the national traits of the korean. >>I love everything about being a Korean.

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