Write something about the things you think a Korean should be proud of.
학생이 쓴 원문
i think it hasnot reanson.
i was bone korea and i leaved in korea
in the fact that is the almost reanson.
the korean war left korea dewastated.
but we succeeded to reconstruct country.
also korea make great advances.
i love on the national traits of the korean.
강사 첨삭
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i think it hasnot reanson.
>>I think there is no reason not to be proud of being a Korean.i was bone korea and i leaved in korea
>>I was born here in Korea nd lived all my life here just the same.in the fact that is the almost reanson.
>>In fact that\'s the reason why I\'m proud of being one.the korean war left korea dewastated.
>>The Korean war left Korea devastated.but we succeeded to reconstruct country.
>>But we were able to reconstrust almost everything.also korea make great advances.
>>Also, Korea made a lot of changes and improvements.i love on the national traits of the korean.
>>I love everything about being a Korean.
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