Write something interesting about your day.
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought a smart watch for few weeks ago.
It\'s my favorite item these days.
I searched everyday many accessory of smart watch like watch straps.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your favorite item nowadays. It seems that you are enjoying your new smart watch.
~Kelly^^
I bought a smart watch for few weeks ago.
>> I bought a smart watch a few weeks ago.
It\'s my favorite item these days.
>> CORRECT
I searched everyday many accessory of smart watch like watch straps.
>> Every day, I search for smart different watch accessories like watch straps.
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