Write your plans for the weekend.
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Hi, Soo Hee!
It\'s good to read about your weekend. This scenario happens to me at times. When I try to plan my weekend it doesn\'t happen that\'s why I stopped planning what to do on a weekend.
I hope I could read the book of Michelle Obama as well. Anyway, thank you for doing this homework. I hope you have a good day!
~ Teacher Josephine~
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Actually, I had lots of things that I have to do but I couldn\'t.
>> I actually had lots of things to do but I couldn\'t.
I got up at 8:30 A.M. and then I had breakfast with my older sister and grand mother.
>> I got up at 8:30 a.m. then I had breakfast with my older sister and grandmother.
I took a shower and I vacumed, washed the dishes, and did the laundry.
>> CORRECT.
It was 3:00 P.M. when it\'s all done.
>> CORRECT or >> I finished them all at 3 p.m.
I was ready to study but I felt tired and had a headache so I took a nap for 2hours...
>>I was ready to study but I felt tired and had a headache so I took a nap for 2hours.
And I woke up I read a book titled \"Becoming\" by Michelle Obama\"
>> Next, I woke up to read a book titled \"Becoming\" by Michelle Obama.
>> It was really interesting story and it made me think a lot about my life and career.
>> It was a really interesting story and it made me think a lot about my life and career.
I could got a good rest last weekend. ^^
>> I got a good rest last weekend.
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