Writer\'s Block
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What do you do when you suffer from writer\'s block?
I usally take some rests.
When I take the rest, I usally read books, listen to music and read my book.
When I read books, I can get new ideas.
And when I listen to music, my stress goes away.
When I read my book, there are things that I have to change so I can change it.
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you do when you suffer from writer\'s block?
I usally take some rests.
>> I usually take some rest. (Note the spelling of \"usually\".)
When I take the rest, I usally read books, listen to music and read my book.
>> When I take a rest, I normally read books, listen to music and read the book I\'m writing.
When I read books, I can get new ideas.
>> CORRECT~~
And when I listen to music, my stress goes away.
>> CORRECT~~
When I read my book, there are things that I have to chang
e so I can change it.
>> When I read the book I\'m working on, and find something that I have to revise, then I can change it.
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