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In Korea, people\'s age is really important because we should use honorific words. If we don\'t use honorific words, it looks really rude specially to the old. I am living in Vietnam now. Vietnamese people also think age is so important when they are talking each other because they have honorific expression same as Korean. It\'s really hard for me to have a conversation with Vietnamese people but I think it looks more considerate to another person.
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Great job, Risa! Practicing your writing and grammar skills will help you improve your English fluency. Continue doing that!^_^
In Korea, people\'s age is really important because we should use honorific words.
>>> In Korea, people\'s age is really important because they should use honorific words.
If we don\'t use honorific words, it looks really rude specially to the old.
>>> If we don\'t use honorific words, it looks really rude specially to the old people.
I am living in Vietnam now.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>I\'m in Vietnam now.
Vietnamese people also think age is so important when they are talking each other because they have honorific expression same as Korean.
>>> Vietnamese people also think age is so important when they are talking to each other because they have honorific expressions the same as Korean.
It\'s really hard for me to have a conversation with Vietnamese people but I think it looks more considerate to another person.
>>> It\'s really hard for me to have a conversation with Vietnamese people but I think some of them are being considerate.
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