[writing] 13/01/03

The power of habit is so awesome. Although a human makes habit, habit also makes a human.I had some nice habits. The best of them is waking up early.Because of that,I can gain more time than others who are s[이름]ping in dawn.For that time, I read some books and wrote something.I became to deeply think, change myself and make me better. But last end of year, I losed the precious one. Coming feeling like the finish, I put away myself. I lived like a beast. I ate something each time my stomach send sign. I toke a s[이름]p each time my eyelids got closed.Therefore, I didn't wake up regular time, naturally. My brain became to stop. My life was to be boring. Last start of new year,I saw a real world. So,I awoke from a dream. Then I set up some goals and bulid new year-plan.And I have gradually woken up regular time. Passing though time writing up, I realize that It's a short time to collapse precious thing, but there needs a hard time to get one. But, I think that time is a present my

Whew! It took me a while to finish checking your written speech, Steve! Goodness! ^___^ I felt proud for you because at least you realized the best thing that you should do in life from now on. I noticed that you\'re good in writing than speaking. How come? :) Well, don\'t worry, you\'re really good with what you\'re doing these days. Live the present, learn from the past, and look forward for a future full of surprises. You can all overcome challenges!! I\'ll see you in class tomorrow! -Teacher Leny   The power of habit is so awesome. >>> Correct. Although a human makes habit, habit also makes a human. >>> Correct. I had some nice habits. >>> Correct. *** Steve, the sentence is grammatically correct but since you\'re practicing those nice habits still or until today, it is better if you will say, \" I have some nice habits.\" Had means you practiced nice habits before but now, you\'re no longer practicing them. The best of them is waking up early. >>> The best among them is waking up early. Because of that,I can gain more time than others who are s[이름]ping in dawn. >>> Because of this habit, I can gain more time than others who s[이름]p at dawn. For that time, I read some books and wrote something. >>> During that time, I read some books and write something. *** Steve, notice the difference of FOR  and DURING. Also, because you always write something everytime you wake up early, you should use write. I became to deeply think, change myself and make me better. >>> I think deeper, try to change myself, and it makes me feel better.But last end of year, I losed the precious one. >>> But at the end of the year, I lost the precious one. >>> OR: But when the year was almost over, I lost the precious one. *** Steve, the past form of the word loose is lost not losed. Also, we have a word loosed in the English language but it has a different meaning. Coming feeling like the finish, I put away myself. >>> When I felt that the year was almost finished, I put away myself. >>> OR: When I felt that I am almost done, I became complacent. I lived like a beast. >>> Correct. I ate something each time my stomach sends sign. >>> Correct. >>> OR: I ate something everytime my stomach says I\'m hungry. I toke a s[이름]p each time my eyelids got closed. >>> I slept each time my eyelids closed. *** Steve, be careful with the spelling of took. In your sentence, you may not use took anymore because it will be redundant with slept. The same with got and closed. Therefore, I didn\'t wake up regular time, naturally. >>> Therefore, naturally,  I didn\'t wake up on a regular basis.   My brain became to stop. >>> My brain stop working properly. >>> My brain halted to function.  My life was to be boring. >>> My life became boring.Last start of new year,I saw a real world. >>> When this new year started, I saw a real world. So,I awoke from a dream. >>> So, it seems like I woke up from a dream. *** Steve, since your experience was bad last year, you can use nightmare instead of a dream.  Then I set up some goals and build new year plans. >>> Correct. And I have gradually woken up regular time. >>> And, gradually, I started waking up regularly.Passing though time writing up, I realize that It\'s a short time to collapse precious thing, but there needs a hard time to get one. >>> While writing, time is passing. Then I realized that time is short when you are wasting it, but if you need it, it become scarce.  But, I think that time is a present my >>> But, I think that time that I wasted made me learn new lessons and perspective. *** Steve, I\'m not sure how you ended your because it was cut. I just ended it through what I think is right. =)