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I chose this debate course to experience various kinds of conversation by speaking English. I used to keep studying for speaking test, so I wanted to be out of the frame of exam. Moreover, I’m keen to be able to express my opinion and emotions fluently by English. Also, I’m excited to undergo different types of topics for my exam that I’ll apply next year. I hope this class to be the useful background when I enter university abroad.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellia!
Thank you for your composition today.
Take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask in class.
I can see your potential.
Let\'s harness what you have and do our best.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I chose this debate course to experience various kinds of conversation by speaking English.
>> I chose this debate course to experience various ways of conversation in English.
I used to keep studying for speaking test, so I wanted to be out of the frame of exam.
>> I used to study only for speaking tests, so I wanted to step outside those limits.
Moreover, I’m keen to be able to express my opinion and emotions fluently by English.
>> Moreover, I’m keen on being able to express my opinion and emotions fluently in English.
Also, I’m excited to undergo different types of topics for my exam that I’ll apply next year.
>> I’m also excited to explore various topics that could help me with the exam I’ll take next year.
I hope this class to be the useful background when I enter university abroad.
>> I hope this class will serve as a useful foundation when I enter university abroad.
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