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1. I'll pick my mother. Because she is older than me and I think she has many experiences that kind of the event. So she'll have a know-how. Maybe, the event will be easier. 2. I can give him advices. If you do not quit smoking, you'll suffer from a serious disease like a cancer. So If I were you, I'd stop smoking. And I'll give him presents like candies, chocolate and chewing gums. When he wants to smoke, Let him eat those things. 3.My sister is able to help me. She is three years younger than me. She is also a student and about my age. She can understand than anybody else. P.S. Hi,Verna! I've forgot to do my homework. I'm So sorry!

Hi Su jin,

                 Thank you for doing your homework. It wasn뭪 late. Don뭪 worry! Great job on your sentences! 

I just want you to be extra careful of the punctuations that you have to use. Take care! See you later!

-Verna -

 1. I'll pick my mother. 

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Because she is older than me and I think she has many experiences that kind of the event. 

>>Because she is older than me and I think she has many experiences on those kinds of the events. 

So she'll have know-how.

>>Correct

 Maybe, the event will be easier.
>>Correct
2. I can give him advices.

>>Correct

If you do not quit smoking, you'll suffer from a serious disease like a cancer.

>>Correct

So If I were you, I'd stop smoking.

>>Correct

And I'll give him presents like candies, chocolate and chewing gums.

>>Correct

When he wants to smoke, let him eat those things.

>>Correct

3.My sister is able to help me.

>> My sister will be able to help me.

She is three years younger than me.

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She is also a student and about my age.

>> She is also a student so we almost have the same situation.

 She can understand than anybody else. 
>> She can understand more than anybody else.
P.S. Hi,Verna!

>> P.S. Hi, Verna!

I've forgot to do my homework.

>> I forgot to do my homework.

 I'm so sorry!

>>Correct