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These days, a number of people pose the view of prison system, whether it is working right or not. On the other sight is arguing that the prisoner’s punishment is lenient. In my opinion, although prison system is still important to our society, however, different measures which can adapt in practicality is need./The people who argue about less use of prisons have several reasons for this. Especially, in the prison, there are plenty of criminals arrange of minor offenders to felonious offenders, and therefore, petty prisoners can learn more serious crimes from their prisoners who committed more vicious crimes. In the future, they can be threat, if they had released into our society. Moreover, they have more possibility of reoffend because of unemployment.The people who are worry about the insufficient retribution of crimes are concerned to an increasing level of crime./The main reason for both issues is lack of role in the prison system.

Hello there^^ Very well said. I like the you expressed your thoughts in this composition. You were very straight forward and that\'s good. Thanks again and see yo u in class. Teacher Kelly   These days, a number of people pose the view of prison system, whether it is working right or not. >>These days, a number of people posted their views about Prison System, whether it tis working or not. On the other sight is arguing that the prisoner’s punishment is lenient. >>On the other hand they are also arguing that the Prinoner\'s Punishmen is lenient. In my opinion, although prison system is still important to our society, however, different measures which can adapt in practicality is need./ >>In my opinion, prison system is still important to our society. However, different measures should be adopeted to improve such system. The people who argue about less use of prisons have several reasons for this. >>You mean to say: The people who argued about being lenient in imposing punishements to prisoners have several reasons. Especially, in the prison, there are plenty of criminals arrange of minor offenders to felonious offenders, and therefore, petty prisoners can learn more serious crimes from their prisoners who committed more vicious crimes. >>Especially in jails, there are many criminals that ranges to minor offenders to felonious offenders, therefore, the petty prisoners can learn more serious crimes from prisoners who committed more vicious crimes. In the future, they can be threat, if they had released into our society. >>In the future they can become a threat in the society once released from jail. Moreover, they have more possibility of reoffend because of unemployment. >>Moreover, they have might be offended because The people who are worry about the insufficient retribution of crimes are concerned to an increasing level of crime./ >>The people who are worrying about the insufficient retribution of crimes are increasing. The main reason for both issues is lack of role in the prison system. >>You mean to say: The main reason for both issues is lack of immediate action in the prison system.