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2011-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Verna! I'm so sorry , today's class was my major class. Professor didn't end the class... I was sitting in front of professor, I couldn't answer the phone! I think I have to consider changing the class time. I think she'll teach me over the regular time. And I need to postpone my class. So take care, see you soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

I understand your situation. I know how hard it is to answer a phone in front of a school professor. Anyway, please go over the corrections for your further improvement. Take care! See you soon!

-T. Verna-

Hi Verna!

>> Correct.
I'm so sorry , today's class was my major class.

>> I’m so sorry. Today's class is my major class.
Professor didn't end the class...

>> Our professor didn’t end the class.
I was sitting in front of professor, I couldn't answer the phone!

>> I was sitting in front of our professor, so I couldn’t answer the phone!
I think I have to consider changing the class time.

>> Correct.
I think she'll teach me over the regular time.

>> Correct.
And I need to postpone my class.

>> Correct.
So take care, see you soon!

>> Take care. See you soon!

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