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Ihave travelled to california last year. That countries' weather was a very good. because the weather is always warm and sunny otherwise weather of korea. korea have four seasons like spring, summer, autumn and winter. actually, i don't like winter. beacuse winter of korea is so cold and freezing. so i like weather of california .

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. Thank you for sharing your experiences with me in your essay. I have learned something from it. Have a nice day ahead! Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: Ihave travelled to california last year. >> I travelled in California last year.That countries\' weather was a very good. because the weather is always warm and sunny >> The weather in that country is very good because it\'s always warm and sunny.otherwise weather of korea. >> The weather is always changing in Korea.korea have four seasons like spring, summer, autumn and winter. >> Korea has four seasons namely spring, summer, autumn and winter.actually, i don\'t like winter. beacuse winter of korea is so cold and freezing. >> Actually, I don\'t like winter season because it\'s freezing cold.so i like weather of california . >> So, I prefer the weather in California.