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2015-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear [Name], Good day! What happened to you? I heard that you had a diarrhea. Are you okay now? I guess you might have had some spoiled food last night. In this case, drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you. In my case, I didn't take today's class with another substitute teacher because I had to handle a lot of tasks in my workplace, so I can say that I took advantage of your absence. Tomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korea customers. Before greeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning. Well, it would be a busy day for me. By the way, I want to talk to you about my yesterday's story. I did two special things. First, I made a [이름]chi by myself. It was my first time to do in my life but the taste was not that good. Second, I watched a movie titled 'Alien 2.' I somehow felt that my weekend seemed too short. Anyway, I hope you can totally get over from your pain. See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^ I apologize for what had happened yesterday. It was an advantage for you to not have me in class but I think, you also missed talking to me.^^ Anyhow, thank you for telling me your stories. Weekend will always be short for busy people. But for sick people, it will always be a long and painful one. Luckily, I only had my diarrhea for one day and I was still able to rest last weekend^^ See you later!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear [Name], >> CorrectGood day! >> Correct What happened to you? >> CorrectI heard that you had a diarrhea. >> CorrectAre you okay now? >> Correct (**Definitely, I am ok!^^)I guess you might have had some spoiled food last night. >> CorrectIn this case, drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you. >> CorrectIn my case, I didn\'t take today\'s class with another substitute teacher because I had to handle a lot of tasks in my workplace, so I can say that I took advantage of your absence. >> CorrectTomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korea customers. >> Tomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korean customers. (Korean is considered as your adjective)Before greeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning. >> Before meeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning. (Use of vocabulary)Well, it would be a busy day for me. >> Correct By the way, I want to talk to you about my yesterday\'s story. >> By the way, I want to talk to you about my story yesterday. (We don\'t normally use and adverb in a possessive form.)I did two special things. >> Correct First, I made a [이름]chi by myself. >> Correct.It was my first time to do in my life but the taste was not that good. >> CorrectSecond, I watched a movie titled \'Alien 2.\' >> Second, I watched a movie entitled \"Alien 2\". (We use entitle in its past participle form to emphasized that it is in the passive voice form.)I somehow felt that my weekend seemed too short. >> Correct Anyway, I hope you can totally get over from your pain. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct

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