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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good day!
What happened to you?
I heard that you had a diarrhea.
Are you okay now?
I guess you might have had some spoiled food last night.
In this case, drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you.
In my case, I didn't take today's class with another substitute teacher because I had to handle a lot of tasks in my workplace, so I can say that I took advantage of your absence.
Tomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korea customers.
Before greeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning.
Well, it would be a busy day for me.
By the way, I want to talk to you about my yesterday's story.
I did two special things.
First, I made a [이름]chi by myself.
It was my first time to do in my life but the taste was not that good.
Second, I watched a movie titled 'Alien 2.'
I somehow felt that my weekend seemed too short.
Anyway, I hope you can totally get over from your pain.
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^
I apologize for what had happened yesterday. It was an advantage
for you to not have me in class but I think, you also missed talking to me.^^
Anyhow, thank you for telling me your stories. Weekend will always be short
for busy people. But for sick people, it will always be a long and painful one.
Luckily, I only had my diarrhea for one day and I was still able to rest last weekend^^
See you later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear [Name],
>> CorrectGood day!
>> Correct What happened to you?
>> CorrectI heard that you had a diarrhea.
>> CorrectAre you okay now?
>> Correct (**Definitely, I am ok!^^)I guess you might have had some spoiled food last night.
>> CorrectIn this case, drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you.
>> CorrectIn my case, I didn\'t take today\'s class with another substitute teacher because I had to handle a lot of tasks in my workplace, so I can
say that I took advantage of your absence.
>> CorrectTomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korea customers.
>> Tomorrow, my Chinese coworkers will be here to discuss some business matters with our Korean customers. (Korean is considered as your adjective)Before greeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning.
>> Before meeting them, I needed to arrange many things for them, so I was occupied this morning. (Use of vocabulary)Well, it would be a busy day for me.
>> Correct By the way, I want to talk to you about my yesterday\'s story.
>> By the way, I want to talk to you about my story yesterday. (We don\'t normally use and adverb in a possessive form.)I did two special things. >> Correct
First, I made a [이름]chi by myself.
>> Correct.It was my first time to do in my life but the taste was not that good.
>> CorrectSecond, I watched a movie titled \'Alien 2.\'
>> Second, I watched a movie entitled \"Alien 2\". (We use entitle in its past participle form to emphasized that it is in the passive voice form.)I somehow felt that my weekend seemed too short.
>> Correct Anyway, I hope you can totally get over from your pain.
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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