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2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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My dream is being a baseball reporter. I really like baseball. But I think I don\'t have a skill of being baseball player. So, I changed my dream into being a baseball reporter. I searched Internet for how to be a baseball reporter. But most of them said it\'s very hard to pass the test. But I want to do things what I love.Now I am writing a report about baseball. Being a college student few years are left. So, I will practice to write the report.

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My dream is being a baseball reporter. I

>> My dream is to become a baseball reporter. 

I really like baseball. But I think I don\'t have a skill of being baseball player.

>> I really like/love baseball but I think I don\'t have the skill to be a baseball player.

So, I changed my dream into being a baseball reporter.

>> So, I changed my dream into becoming a baseball reporter.

I searched Internet for how to be a baseball reporter. But most of them said it\'s very hard to pass the test. But I want to do things what I love.

>> I searched the internet on how to be a baseball reporter but most of it says that it\'s very hard to pass the test. However, I really want to do what I love.

Now I am writing a report about baseball.

>> Now, I am writing a report about baseball.

Being a college student few years are left. So, I will practice to write the report.

>> I few years left before college, so, I will keep practicing writing a baseball report.

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