Writing about baseball articles.
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My dream is being a baseball reporter. I
>> My dream is to become a baseball reporter.
I really like baseball. But I think I don\'t have a skill of being baseball player.
>> I really like/love baseball but I think I don\'t have the skill to be a baseball player.
So, I changed my dream into being a baseball reporter.
>> So, I changed my dream into becoming a baseball reporter.
I searched Internet for how to be a baseball reporter. But most of them said it\'s very hard to pass the test. But I want to do things what I love.
>> I searched the internet on how to be a baseball reporter but most of it says that it\'s very hard to pass the test. However, I really want to do what I love.
Now I am writing a report about baseball.
>> Now, I am writing a report about baseball.
Being a college student few years are left. So, I will practice to write the report.
>> I few years left before college, so, I will keep practicing writing a baseball report.
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