Writing assignment from Charry's class
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Hi, Evelyn! ^_^
Thank you for promptly writing an essay for tonight.
I\'m amazed with how you answered this question.
People should learn to see what\'s inside and not only rely on what they see outside.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
Enjoy your weekend. ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
It means, beauty is not enough to be a measure to judge someone.
>> It means, beauty is not enough to measure or to judge someone.
External attractiveness is only what you can see from the outside.
>> CORRECT!
However, a single person has so many characteristics you can\'t see such as personality and the way of thinking.
>> CORRECT!
Just like the saying, \"Don\'t judge a book by its cover\", appearance can\'t tell you what kind of person he or she is.
>> CORRECT!
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