Writing Drill

1. Although the computer have made our life more easy, but there are some drawbacks as well 2. When I'm stressed, I would go somewhere to be alone. 3. While living in city might be stressful, it has lots of benefits as well. 4. The fact someone is a rich don't make him successful. 5. How you learn depends on what kind of person you are.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Here\'s to your writing drill! Great sentences! Just a minimal correction on it. I hope you study on each sentence carefully!^^ Enjoy your weekend T\' Joan 1. Although the computer have made our life more easy, but there are some drawbacks as well >> Although the computer have made our life easier, there are some drawbacks as well.2. When I\'m stressed, I would go somewhere to be alone. >>When I\'m stressed, I go somewhere to be alone.3. While living in city might be stressful, it has lots of benefits as well. >>CORRECT!4. The fact someone is a rich don\'t make him successful. >>The fact that someone is rich don\'t make him successful.5. How you learn depends on what kind of person you are. >>CORRECT!