Writing email
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강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
Thank you for being such a diligent student.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
See you in class!
~~ Teacher Sharon
What would happen if emails no longer exist in working environment?
>> What would happen if emails no longer exist in the workplace?
I believe there will be only few left we can do.
>> I believe there won\'t be that much left to do.
It is true that email has become an important communication tool in business.
>> Correct
Therefore, we write a number of emails everyday.
>> Correct
Would emails affect writing skills?
>> Correct
I think it would enhance our writing skills because it also has structures.
>> I think it would enhance our writing skills because it also has structure.
Email normally starts with greeting followed by main idea that you want to convey.
>> Email normally starts with a greeting followed by the main idea that you want to convey.
Accuracy is an essential element of email so you need to write logically.
>> Correct
It has to be based on who, when, why, where, what and how.
>> It has to be based on the questions, who, when, why, where, what and how.
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