Writing Essay(Mar 9th, 2022)
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Would you rather be rich, but alone or poor, but happy?
>>I would rather choose the first one. If I’m poor, I’m sure I wouldn’t be happy. However if I’m rich, but alone, I would have many chances of getting married, which means I could have my own, lovely family!
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Hello, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. Have a good night!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I would rather choose the first one.
>> Correct!
If I’m poor, I’m sure I wouldn’t be happy.
>> Correct!
However if I’m rich, but alone, I would have many chances of getting married, which means I could have my own, lovely family!
>> However, if I’m rich, but alone, I would have many chances of getting married, which means I could have my own, lovely family!
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