writing exercise

2023-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1. i would like you to tell me how to prepare and review for the class? 2. what else should i prepare for this class? 3. i want to speak english without hesitation 4. i also want to get each band 8.0scores in ielts in the future. 5. i want to prepare for certain situations like making a real estate contract.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for your composition.

Please look at the suggestions below.

If you have any questions, please ask in class.

You have expressed yourself well and I hope you would continue to do so.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

i would like you to tell me how to prepare and review for the class?

>> I would like you to tell me how to prepare and review for the class.
what else should i prepare for this class?

>> What else should I prepare for this class?
i want to speak english without hesitation

>> I want to speak English without hesitation.
i also want to get each band 8.0scores in ielts in the future.

>> I also want to get an 8.0 band score in IELTS in the future.
i want to prepare for certain situations like making a real estate contract.

>> I want to prepare for certain situations like making a real estate contract.

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