Writing Exercise: Describe a situation where you had to adapt to change. Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I grew up in a wealthy family as a child. However, my father passed away early, and from then on, the hard life began. After my father passed away, I worked part-time to overcome the difficult situation and overcame the difficult times to become who I am today.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I would say that you really work hard.
I know that you have a busy life.
I appreciate that you\'re writing to improve yourself.
You\'re showing your commitment to develop yourself.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I grew up in a wealthy family as a child.
>> Correct
However, my father passed away early, and from then on, the hard life began.
>> Correct
After my father passed away, I worked part-time to overcome the difficult situation and overcame the difficult times to become who I am today.
>> After my father passed away, I worked part-time to overcome the difficult situation and I overcame the difficult times to become who I am today.
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