Writing Exercise: How do you manage your work-life balance?
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Divided the time of the day. After setting the minimum sleep time among 24 hours excluding working hours, exercise and rest during the remaining time.
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Divided the time of the day.
>> I divide the hours in a day.
After setting the minimum sleep time among 24 hours excluding working hours, exercise and rest during the remaining time.
>> After setting the minimum sleep time among 24 hours excluding working hours, I exercise and rest during the remaining time.
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