Writing Exercise: How do you usually handle stress? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
One of the ways that I handle stress is to spend a quality time with my child. Even sometimes, I don\'t send him to the nursery school and play with him. Playing with him at home and going out side to do special activities are both good for me. When I am with him, I don\'t have to think about serious things. All I have to do is to enjoy the time and laugh with him. He is my greatest stress reliever ever.
강사 첨삭
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There are some minor changes.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
One of the ways that I handle stress is to spend a quality time with my child.
>> One of the ways that I handle stress is to spend quality time with my child.
Even sometimes, I don\'t send him to the nursery school and play with him.
>> Sometimes, I don\'t send him to the nursery school and I just play with him.
Playing with him at home and going out side to do special activities are both good for me.
>> Playing with him at home and going outside to do special activities are both good for me.
When I am with him, I don\'t have to think about serious things.
>> Correct
All I have to do is to enjoy the time and laugh with him.
>> Correct
He is my greatest stress reliever ever.
>> Correct
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