Writing Exercise: How important is beauty in your daily life? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people care about beauty. between couple, in company, etc.. and I also care about beauty.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Try making simpler and shorter sentences.
This is good for you to express your ideas.
You are doing great!
Keep writing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Many people care about beauty.
>> Correct
between couple, in company, etc..
>> It\'s important among couples, companies and others.
and I also care about beauty.
>> I also care about beauty.
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