Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher

2023-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Before start to class, I\'m very nervous. Because learning to English is long time ago. So, speak to english is so unfamiliar. I want to answer about teacher\'s questions today, but I can\'t. Because there are many English what I don\'t know. I\'m exciting next class!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]ice!
Thank you for your composition.
You did really well!
Take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask during the class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Before start to class, I\'m very nervous.
>> I was very nervous before the class started.
Because learning to English is long time ago.
>> It\'s because it\'s been a long time since I learned English. 
So, speak to english is so unfamiliar.
>> It\'s because speaking in English feels unfamiliar.
I want to answer about teacher\'s questions today, but I can\'t.
>> I wanted to answer all of my teacher\'s questions tonight but I couldn\'t.
Because there are many English what I don\'t know.
>> It\'s because I don\'t know many English words.
I\'m exciting next class!
>> I\'m really excited for our next class!

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