Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher

2025-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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[My original writing] I hope to take a practical and hard class for IELTS test. I want to answer the questions spontaneously and naturally in the real test based on the prepared ideas of the question sheets that I made. I think it would be not easy to get a targeted score because I have to acquire the score in July, or at least, up to August. But I will try my best in your class with a passionate attitude. If you have better plans for it, I will conform with you. After the exam, I hope to keep learning English not just for the test, but for a daily use with you. I wish to be accustomed to speaking English fluently someday.

강사 첨삭

Hi Isaac!
Thank you for your composition today.
Take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask in class.
I can see your potential.
Let\'s harness what you have and do our best.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I hope to take a practical and hard class for IELTS test. 
>> I hope to take a practical and hard class to prepare me for the IELTS test.
I want to answer the questions spontaneously and naturally in the real test based on the prepared ideas of the question sheets that I made. 
>> Correct
I think it would be not easy to get a targeted score because I have to acquire the score in July, or at least, up to August. 
>> I think it would not be easy to get a targeted score because I have to acquire the score in July, or at least, up to August. 
But I will try my best in your class with a passionate attitude. 
>> However, I will try my best in your class with a passionate attitude. 
If you have better plans for it, I will conform with you. 
>> If you have better plans, I will conform to them.
After the exam, I hope to keep learning English not just for the test, but for a daily use with you. 
>> After the exam, I hope to keep learning English with you not just for the test, but for daily use.
I wish to be accustomed to speaking English fluently someday.
>> Correct

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