Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
I hope I can make sentences correctly. because, I\'m studying English which especially grammer quite long time. Even though this, I have many grammatic error and confuse about my sentences. Furthermore, As I told you I have only 3weeks left until I\'ll take IELTS exam. So, I want to practice a lot of speaking and writing as much as I can. thanks million :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay!
Thank you for your composition.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, please ask me in class.
I appreciate your effort.
I\'ll talk to you soon!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I hope I can make sentences correctly.
>> I hope I can make correct sentences.
because, I\'m studying English which especially grammer quite long time.
>> This is because I have been studying English, especially grammar, for quite a long time now.
Even though this, I have many grammatic error and confuse about my sentences.
>> Even so, I make many grammatical errors and often get confused about my sentences.
Furthermore, As I told you I have only 3weeks left until I\'ll take IELTS exam.
>> Furthermore, as I told you I have only 3 weeks left until I take the IELTS exam.
So, I want to practice a lot of speaking and writing as much as I can.
>> Correct
thanks million
>> Thanks a million.
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