Writing Exercise: Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent? Answer in 5 sentences or
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm better to be physically attractive. because i'm good at playing sport and also enjoy it
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Playing sports is really good for your health.
I hope you continue doing that.^^
Please take note of the correction below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m better to be physically attractive. because i\'m good at playing sport and also enjoy it
>> It\'s better for me to be physically attractive because I\'m good at playing sports and I also enjoy it.
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