Writing Exercise: Is there someone famous who is considered beautiful but you think is not? Who is t
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It can be anyone. When you makeup you think it looks good but other people don't think it is.
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Hi [이름]!
That actually makes sense.
Maybe, you can add examples next time.
This can make your point clear and interesting.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It can be anyone. >> It could be anyone.
When you makeup you think it looks good but other people don\'t think it is.
>> People might think that they look good when they put makeup on but the truth is that they don\'t.
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