Writing Exercise: Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like th

Writing Exercise: Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why. Thousands of people have thousands of lifestyles. Some may pursue change in their life but others believe that less flexible their life is, more happier they are. In my case, i prefer to stay the similar in my life. First of all, a stable routine on a daily basis assures an efficiency of one\'s life. Nakamura Ichiro, a famous japanese maestro in cooking sushi, explained how he had improved his s[이름]ls. He said, \"Most effective way to be the best is being a gear of watch.\" What he means is that every and each day\'s repeated work will improve your s[이름]ls a lot. Unchangea

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Thousands of people have thousands of lifestyles.

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Some may pursue change in their life but others believe that less flexible their life is, more happier they are.

>> Some may pursue change in their life but others believe that the less flexible their life is, the happier they are.

In my case, i prefer to stay the similar in my life. 

>> In my case, I prefer to stay the same in my life.

First of all, a stable routine on a daily basis assures an efficiency of one\'s life.

>> First of all, a stable routine on a daily basis assures an efficiency in one\'s life.

Nakamura Ichiro, a famous japanese maestro in cooking sushi, explained how he had improved his s[이름]ls.

>> Nakamura Ichiro, a famous Japanese maestro in cooking sushi, explained how he had improved his s[이름]ls.

He said, \"Most effective way to be the best is being a gear of watch.\"

>> Correct

What he means is that every and each day\'s repeated work will improve your s[이름]ls a lot.

>> Correct

Unchangeable routines let you focus on the thing you need to do and ignore useless things. 

>> Unchanging routines let you focus on the thing you need to do and ignore useless things. 

Secondly, if you stay the same, you will worry less.

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New experiences are adventures.

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If you explored an unknown area everyday, you would be more and more neurotic.

>> If you explore an unknown area every day, you would be more and more neurotic.

It is because you don\'t know what will emerge in front of you.

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However, when you are in a fixed routine of life, you don\'t need to worry about if what will make you confused.

>> However, when you follow a routine in life, you don\'t need to worry about things that can make you confused.

In conclusion, there are explicit benefits by staying the same in our life.

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We can be more efficient to improve ourselves and at the same time we will worry less.

>> We can be more efficient in improving ourselves and at the same time, we will worry less.

 Therefore, i prefer to keep my usual habits in my life. 

>> Therefore, I prefer to keep my usual habits in life.