Writing Exercise: What is the most difficult thing you’ve ever done? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
I took an airplane alone. It's the most difficult thing I've ever done before. because taking airplane alone is dangerous
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You were very brave to do that.
It\'s not easy to fly alone.
You have a good head on your shoulders.
I\'m sure you will be fine.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I took an airplane alone. >> I rode went on an airplane alone before.
It\'s the most difficult thing I\'ve ever done before. because taking airplane alone is dangerous
>> It\'s the most difficult thing I\'ve ever done before because flying on an airplane alone is dangerous.
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