Writing Exercise: What was the highlight of your week? Share the story in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
My father just came back to home. He was sick so he stay about a month in hospital
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m glad your father is feeling better.
I hope for his good health.
Take care!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My father just came back to home. >> My father just came back home.
He was sick so he stay about a month in hospital
>> He was sick so he stayed for about a month in the hospital.
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