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The importance of family is so great.
Without a family,life is not happy.
no one knows about me well.
and there is really a need fot something importance.
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The importance of family is so great.
>>> CORRECT
Without a family,life is not happy.
Without a family,life is not happy.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Life won\'t be complete without a family.
no one knows about me well.
no one knows about me well.
>>> No one knows me well but my family.
and there is really a need fot something importance.
and there is really a need fot something importance.
>>> Thus, it is really important.
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