Writing homework

Good morning [이름]!

Thank you so much for writing this.

I made the necessary corrections below. Kindly go over them.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

[How would you effectively communicate your thoughts to a person who doesn\'t speak your language ?]

If the person who doesn\'t speak Korea can speak English, it\'s fortune. 

>>> If the person who doesn\'t speak Korean can speak English, it\'s fortunate.
I can communicate in English with body language.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: I can communicate in English with gestures.
But, even we can speak English both, sometimes making some sentence or saying my opinion are really difficult. 

>>> But even we can speak English and use body language, sometimes making some sentences to express my thoughts is really difficult.
At that time, I cut the sentence to separated simply. 

>>> In that situation, I will try to explain my thoughts in the simplest way.
But, sometimes describing about plant or fish what I want is really difficult. 

>>> However, describing things or saying what I want is really hard.
So, I just shows the picture in my smartphone. 

>>> So, I will just show some pictures in my smartphone.
It\'s easy and smart way.

>>> It\'s an easy and smart way.