Writing homework

2019-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

1) She really wants to get a new smart phone because her phone is very old and dirty. 2) Where did you get this note? 3) He got a high score from the middle exam but he didn\'t satisfy from it. 4) If the clothes which I put out on the used market are sold, I can get almost 100 dollars. 5) Excuse me, could you get some teas to me?

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Lily! ^-^

I\'m glad you found time to do your homework.

Thank you so much for this composition. I suggest you work more on your grammar.

Simplify your sentences and do not go around the bush.^^

Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)

1) She really wants to get a new smart phone because her phone is very old and dirty.

>>> She really wants to get a new smartphone because her phone is very old and dirty.

2) Where did you get this note?

>>> CORRECT

3) He got a high score from the middle exam but he didn\'t satisfy from it.

>>> He got a high score in the middle exam but he didn\'t feel satisfied.

4) If the clothes which I put out on the used market are sold, I can get almost 100 dollars.

>>> CORRECT

5) Excuse me, could you get some teas to me?

>>> Excuse me, could you get some tea for me?

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