Writing : If you could give the leader of your country some advice, what would it be?

Hi there Mr. [이름]!(\",)

I\'m curious, what was President Moon\'s promise before the election? I kind of forgot. Remind me.(\",)

~T. Lynn

If I give advice, First, I want to say take a break.

>> If I can give him an advice, I\'ll say first he should take a break.
Recently, he seems to be pushing ahead with various events such as visiting North Korea and visiting Europe.

>> correct!

I\'d advise him to take a rest and do the work of the country, even considering your age.

>> I\'d advise him to take a rest and do his work for/ in the country, even considering his age.
Second, no matter how hard it is, I advise you to follow your conviction.

>> correct!

I want to see him keep his promise before he became president.

>> correct!

OR>> I want him to keep his promise before the election.