Writing Practice

1. I doubt I'm able to make such a decision without my parents' advice. 2. I'm going to discuss what helps people live longer. 3. I think he likes the thing I like most about my village. 4. Before we build new movie theather, we need to know how it affects our local economy. 5. You may wonder who your roomate is. 6. How make an effort is more important than winning or losing. 7. While most people study history, a few recognize its value. 8. If I have to choice, I would rather work at a high salary job with long hour.

Hi [이름]^^ Great job on your writing practice. This would really take you further if you keep doing it. Check the following corrections^^ T\' Joan   1. I doubt I\'m able to make such a decision without my parents\' advice.>>I doubt if I will be able to make such a decision without my parents\' advice.2. I\'m going to discuss what helps people live longer.>>CORRECT!3. I think he likes the thing I like most about my village.>>CORRECT!4. Before we build new movie theather, we need to know how it affects our local economy.>>Before we build a new movie theather, we need to know how it affects our local economy.5. You may wonder who your roomate is.>>CORRECT!6. How make an effort is more important than winning or losing.>>How to make an effort is more important than winning or losing.7. While most people study history, a few recognize its value.>>CORRECT!8. If I have to choice, I would rather work at a high salary job with long hour. >>If I have to choose, I would rather work at a high salary job with long hour.