writing practice-2

It is because that many students cannot have an opportunity that choose their way by their own preference, if their parents and other adults do not want it. Because of this, students cannot help making troubles. If the role of school is to raise teenager’s each capabilities, characters, and dreams that is not easy to accept to the old people’s stereotype, students can fine their own way to solute their problems in life. In this aspect, I have heard about new education that can help teenager to overcome their worries and to develop their future sound life in the alternative school. Then there are appearing some good cases to reveal the effects that so called the problem child and adolescent stopped to make aimless resistance to society and their parents.

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It is because that many students cannot have an opportunity that choose their way by their own preference, if their parents and other adults do not want it.

>>Many students don뭪 have an opportunity to choose what they prefer because their parents or other adults don뭪 want it.

Because of this, students cannot help making troubles.

>>Because of this, students do not stop making trouble.

 If the role of school is to raise teenager’s each capabilities, characters, and dreams that is not easy to accept to the old people’s stereotype, students can fine their own way to solute their problems in life.

>>If the role of the school is to raise teenagers